“Balance of Terror”
Written by Paul Schneider
Directed by Vincent McEveety
Season 1, Episode 14
Production episode: 1×09
Original air date: December 15, 1966
Star date: 1709.2
Mission summary
Captain Kirk is presiding over a non-denominational wedding ceremony of two members of his crew when an emergency calls him back to the bridge. There’s no time for romance on the Enterprise, at least not while Earth Outpost 4 is being attacked by an unknown vessel. Kirk orders condition red and the ship warps to the rescue.
Spock, the expositional, er, executive officer, summarizes the situation, complete with Powerpoint slides: They’ve lost contact with several outposts set up inside asteroids along their side of “the Neutral Zone.” A century ago, humans and Romulans fought a nuclear war in space, without ever seeing the face of the enemy due to the limited technology of the time. A subspace radio treaty established a Neutral Zone between their homeworlds; if either party crosses the zone, it will be considered an act of war. Presumably, coming over and blowing up the other side’s stuff is also an act of war. But regardless of what the Romulans might be doing, Kirk is under orders not to violate the treaty under any circumstances—the Enterprise and the outposts might as well be painted red, because they’re expendable.
Surly navigator of the week is played by Lieutenant Stiles, who urges them to take care of the Romulans immediately; his ancestors were killed in the Earth-Romulan war, and he’s looking for some payback. Kirk advises him to chill, and reminds him that they don’t even know what a Romulan ship looks like these days. For all they know, it could look like a giant painted bird, but that would just be silly. As they approach Outpost 4, they discover debris from Outposts 2 and 3, which were completely destroyed—asteroids and all. Kirk orders weapons ready. Briefly, we revisit the couple from the earlier wedding, who both work in Phaser Control. Well, Kirk’s certainly not one to discourage fraternization among his crew, is he?
The Enterprise finally makes contact with Commander Hansen of the beseiged Outpost 4. The situation doesn’t look good. His office is burning around him. The fact that it’s been damaged a mile deep into an asteroid made of solid iron gives an indication of what they’re up against. He helpfully tells them that a “space vessel” attacked them before it disappeared. He sends the Enterprise a feed from his viewscreen, just as the ship reappears and fires a red ball of plasma at the outpost. Before the signal is cut off, the attacking ship disappears again.
Kirk and Spock theorize that the vanishing ship has to reappear in order to fire its plasma weapon. Spock gets a read on it, but the enemy doesn’t seem to be aware of them—perhaps their systems make them as blind as they are invisible. Kirk orders Sulu to match the enemy’s course exactly, so they might appear to be only a reflection. Stiles again urges them to attack while they can, not only continuing to assume that they’re Romulans, but also proposing that they may have a spy on board. This guy is supremely paranoid, but Sulu backs him up.
Uhura intercepts a transmission from the enemy ship, and Spock patches it into the viewscreen. They get a glimpse of the commander and are astonished to see that he looks just like a Vulcan! Everyone gets a bit uncomfortable, and Stiles soon turns his suspicions to Spock. Kirk reprimands him, “Leave any bigotry in your quarters. There’s no room for it on the Bridge.”
Meanwhile, on the Romulan ship… The enemy commander orders that they maintain their cloaking system, certain that they’re being followed, while his men insist that the signal following them is only an echo. To assert his authority, the commander demotes his man Decius for sending the transmission the Enterprise detected. He has a strong sense of duty, but is clearly a bit war-weary:
No need to tell you what happens when we reach home with proof of the Earthmen’s weakness. And we will have proof. The Earth commander will follow. He must. When he attacks, we will destroy him. Our gift to the homeland, another war.
He wishes they could end the cycle of death, and even indicates he harbors a death wish to avoid his responsibility and his role in beginning another war campaign.
With the Enterprise only an hour away from the Neutral Zone, Kirk calls a meeting to analyze debris collected from Outpost 4 and discuss their options. McCoy stresses how important their actions will be in determining the fates of “millions and millions of lives.” Stiles continues to advocate attacking while the Romulans are in their space, and Spock surprisingly agrees. He admits that the Romulans are apparently offshoots of his own species, and that this makes them extremely dangerous.
Vulcan, like Earth, had its aggressive colonizing period. Savage, even by Earth standards. And if Romulans retain this martial philosophy, then weakness is something we dare not show.
The Romulan ship heads for a comet’s tail, which will give the Enterprise the best chance at seeing through their cloak. The Romulan commander, on the other hand, is gambling that the same comet will scramble the Enterprise’s sensors. They’re both right. At the last second, the commander realizes his mistake and alters his course. Kirk realizes that the commander realized his mistake and the Enterprise fires its phasers blindly, striking a lucky hit on the enemy. The Enterprise’s phasers overload, just when the Romulan Bird-of-Prey appears and fires its plasma thingey at them. Unable to fire at the approaching ball of energy, the Enterprise tries to outrun it like Indiana Jones and the giant boulder. Fortunately for them, the plasma ball loses energy over distance, hitting them with much-weakened force.
They continue shadowing the Romulans and fire on them once more just before reaching the Neutral Zone, scoring another incredibly lucky hit with the repaired phasers. Kirk decides to pursue the Romulans into the Neutral Zone, guns still blazing, and sends a message back to Starfleet Command asking for their orders.
In another Romulan ploy, the enemy commander jettisons a bunch of debris from his ship, along with the dead body of his friend the Centurion, who was killed in the Enterprise’s last attack. Spock sees through the ruse, but the Romulan ship has stopped moving and no longer appears on sensors. Kirk orders the Enterprise to hold position and maintain silence as well. And they sit. And they wait.
Kirk rests and worries in his quarters. First Yeoman Rand, then Dr. McCoy comes to check on him. Kirk opens up to the doctor about his insecurities:
I wish I were on a long sea voyage somewhere. Not too much deck tennis, no frantic dancing, and no responsibility. Why me? I look around that Bridge, and I see the men waiting for me to make the next move. And Bones, what if I’m wrong?
McCoy gives him what passes for a pep talk, telling Kirk not to make the wrong decision and destroy himself—not much help there, doc.
After Spock completes his repairs on the Bridge, he accidentally switches his Bridge station on. The Romulans detect their signal and move in. After nearly ten hours of waiting in the dark, it’s back to battle stations! Kirk continues to anticipate the Commander’s moves and deals heavy damage with their phasers. The Romulan commander decides to release more of their seemingly endless supply of debris, with a little added surprise for his enemy: an old atomic warhead with a “proximity fuse.”
The Enterprise discovers and destroys the mine, but the explosion is close enough to knock the ship on its aft. Worse still, it takes so much damage that only the forward phasers are operational, and there’s only one person to man them, Specialist Tomlinson, the groom from the doomed wedding. Mr. Stiles offers to help him, while the Enterprise plays possum, hoping to lure the Romulans out of the Neutral Zone. The Romulan commander kind of just wants to go home, but he’s pressured into finishing off the enemy.
Spock checks on Stiles and Tomlinson, but Stiles refuses his offer of assistance: “This time, we’ll handle things without your help, Vulcan.“ Spock leaves, just as purple gas begins seeping into the Phaser Control room. This is the worst time for a coolant leak, because at that moment the Romulan ship decloaks right in front of the Enterprise. Kirk orders the phasers to fire, but the gas has incapacitated Stiles and Tomlinson. Spock rushes into the Control room and manages to fire just in time, making a direct hit on the Bird-of-Prey.
Kirk orders the Enterprise closer and hails the Romulans to offer assistance. For the first time, he speaks to the commander face to face:
KIRK: Captain. Standing by to beam your survivors aboard our ship. Prepare to abandon your vessel.
COMMANDER: No. No, that is not our way. I regret that we meet in this way. You and I are of a kind. In a different reality, I could have called you friend.
KIRK: What purpose will it serve to die?
COMMANDER: We are creatures of duty, Captain. I have lived my life by it. Just one more duty to perform.
Then the commander activates the self-destruct on the Romulan ship.
Kirk visits Spock and Stiles in Sickbay. The Vulcan has become Stiles’ new best friend after saving his life. The only casualty from the altercation was Tomlinson, the man whose marriage was interrupted. It’s small consolation, but they also finally receive word from Starfleet Command, backing up whatever decision Kirk makes.
Kirk visits Angela Martine, the bereft bride, who is crying in the ship’s chapel where she was to be married. Kirk tries to comfort her:
KIRK: It never makes any sense. We both have to know that there was a reason.
ANGELA: I’m all right.
Analysis
This is an incredibly riveting and layered episode, a tense war story pitting two vessels against unknown enemies. There are obvious parallels to naval battles between seafaring ships and submarines; Kirk and the Romulan commander are essentially playing Battleship, but Kirk has much better luck at guessing his opponent’s position.
This episode always comes to mind as some of the best that Star Trek, and science fiction television in general, has to offer. Though we are obviously meant to root for the Enterprise, the Romulan commander is very sympathetic. He’s shown as a military man who has grown tired of war and longs to return home, like Gladiator in space; the worst thing he can imagine is being responsible for reigniting an old conflict with the humans, but he is also sworn to fulfill his mission to test their defenses. He confides in his friend, “Centurion, I find myself wishing for destruction before we can return.” When he gets his wish, and displays true regret for his actions, pretty much everyone feels sorry for him. Under different circumstances, that could have been Kirk and his crew facing defeat.
It’s the similarities and differences between Kirk and the Romulan commander that are most interesting. The commander says they are “of a kind”: both of them are smart and committed to their duty, strategically fairly even matched, and neither want this war. It’s their respective cultures that prevent them from meeting as friends. The Romulans are strongly militant, curiously similar to the Romans in Earth’s history (right down to planets named Romulus and Remus, an odd coincidence that no one ever remarks on in the series). When Decius makes a mistake, the commander must demote him by two ranks in order to show his strength, but when Spock blows it on the Bridge and nearly gets them all killed, Kirk gives him a free pass.
The insubordination Stiles shows on the Enterprise would get him killed on a Romulan ship, but Starfleet and Kirk have different ways of handling their crews—as people, not simply soldiers. Even in the end, the commander seems to want to let the Enterprise go, either out of respect or a last hope of avoiding war and his own destruction, but he’s pushed into going for the kill when his crewman asks for the honor. His culture’s high regard for dying in battle prevents him from surrendering to Kirk, even to save his own life. And maybe he knows he’s forestalling war by showing that Earth’s defenses are strong.
There may be some other parallels to Earth’s history, namely, World War II. There’s the reference to nuclear weapons, of course, and the Romulans are as strange and frightening to (some) humans as the Japanese were to Americans. Spock says, “Earth believes the Romulans to be warlike, cruel, treacherous, and only the Romulans know what they think of Earth.”
In WWII, the Japanese were just as demonized for their strangely selfless devotion to duty and the honor placed in dying for their country. This isn’t too far from the uninformed characterization of the Romulans. There’s also a similarity between the sneak attack by the Japanese on Pearl Harbor and the Romulan attacks on Earth Outposts 2, 3, 4, and 8—with a familiar reaction from Stiles in demanding revenge and accusing Spock of collaborating. I thought it interesting that Sulu, the Japanese representative on the Bridge crew, backs up Stiles’ concern about spies among them.
This episode has a pretty obvious moral, that we shouldn’t judge others on their appearance, and that you can’t assume that all members of a race or species are exactly the same. Despite the culture in which he lives, the Romulan commander was a thoughtful, respectful, compassionate man who disagreed with the imperialist ambitions of his Praetor. He’s the kind of man who, in the middle of a deadly battle with a fierce enemy, stops and smells the roses; as his ship heads into the comet’s tail, he admires the sight and calls it “a marvel in the darkness.”
On another note, it does seem a little suspicious that Spock doesn’t know anything about the Romulans, isn’t it? What’s also weird is that when he talks about Romulus and Remus, the chart of the Neutral Zone clearly shows Romulus and a planet called “Romii” within the Romulan Star Empire. Oops? Well, I suppose we didn’t hear about the Remans for a while either…
And uh, is it just me, or do the Enterprise’s phasers act a lot like photon torpedoes in this episode? I guess the lovebirds in Phaser Control had their minds on other things.
Eugene’s Rating: Warp 6 (on a scale of 1-6)
Torie Atkinson: Brilliant, tense, and serious: the best of Star Trek is right here in this episode. The slow, determined pacing, the tension, and the atmosphere of fear and uncertainly perfectly encapsulate the feeling of what is essentially a Cold War between the humans and the Romulans. As Eugene mentions, this is very much a post-WWII piece—an atomic past that led to terrible destruction is the backdrop for this new confrontation. Will things be different this time, or can individuals break the cycle of war? When millions of lives are at stake, do you fight to prevent a fight? McCoy asks what that fight would even be based on: “Memories of a war over a century ago? On theories about a people we’ve never even met face to face?” Kirk reminds Stiles that this is a different time. “Their war, Mister Stiles. Not yours. Don’t forget it.”
When we first see the Romulans, the camera lingers on that image for a good long while. Everyone looks at Spock, and we see the very real and terrible act of bigotry. I re-watched that scene, and it sends chills down my spine. Stiles looks at Spock with hatred, which should surprise no one, but everyone else looks at him with fear. Who is this? Is he a friend, or an enemy? What matters more, my experiences with him or others’ experiences with those who look like him? That fear-based racism is as devastating as Stiles’ flat-out hatred (if not more so). Spock sees that fear and that hate and he swallows it and he goes on, just as so many do every day. This isn’t a world without hate, or without racism, as I’ve heard people claim. It’s a world in which they exist, but they are not okay, and the culture and society look down upon and reject that kind of response as primitive, cruel, and unenlightened. Kirk rebukes Stiles’ hatred, and makes it clear that that is not acceptable. Spock, in the end, “proves” that he is a friend—proof that wouldn’t be necessary if he had been human. The fact that Gene Roddenberry wasn’t afraid to engage with that bluntly and seriously is a testament to the greatness of the series.
This is perhaps most poignant in the final exchange between Kirk and the Romulan commander, when they realize how similar they are, and how close they could have been if circumstances had been different. The commander says, “In a different reality, I could have called you friend.” In a different reality he could have been Vulcan, not Romulan. He could have been Spock, and they could have served together. They could have been friends and fellow soldiers. Such is the nature of all wars, and duty and honor are strong forces. But what if… The optimism and hope is painfully sincere, and I think in any other show (or in a weaker episode) it would come off as foolish and ridiculous. But what if there were no struggle between individual feelings and duty to one’s country? What if those in war all saw each other as people, as individuals with their own motives, feelings, and histories, and came together on that common ground? Would shots still be fired?
“War is never imperative,” McCoy says. What if? Well… it’s hard to imagine except in SFF, isn’t it? But I’m glad Star Trek tried to imagine it nonetheless.
Torie’s Rating: Warp 6 (on a scale of 1-6)
Best Line: McCoy: “In this galaxy, there’s a mathematical probability of three million Earth-type planets. And in all of the universe, three million million galaxies like this. And in all of that, and perhaps more, only one of each of us.”
Syndication Edits: The usual slew of reaction and establishing shots; Uhura’s comment about the Romulan message sounding like it’s in code; Spock trying to lock into the transmission to see the Romulan bridge; Spock listening to the tape Uhura creates; an interaction between Sulu and Kirk in which Sulu explains that the Romulan vessel is changing course and Kirk tells him to stay with the other ship; some phaser shots; one of Stiles’ dirty looks; the Romulan commander ordering evasive maneuvers; Rand’s appearance in Kirk’s quarters; and a sequence right after Spock fires the phasers, in which Kirk orders Sulu to bring them closer and Uhura opens hailing frequencies.
Trivia: The brilliant Mark Lenard, who plays the Romulan Commander, was the first Star Trek actor to appear onscreen as three different aliens: a Romulan here, a Klingon (in Star Trek: The Motion Picture), and of course, a Vulcan—Spock’s dad, Sarek. Lawrence Montaigne, who plays Decius, reappears as Stonn in “Amok Time.”
The artist Wah Chang designed and constructed the Romulan warship. He never received screen credit for this, so we’re thanking him here.
Other notes: This episode is basically a ripoff of two movies about submarine warfare, The Enemy Below (1957) and Silent, Run Deep (1958, directed by Robert Wise who later helmed ST:TMP). And if you’re wondering why all the other Romulans are wearing Roman helmets, it’s not just for mood: it was cheaper than making them all synthetic ears.
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Next Episode: Season 1, Episode 14 – “Shore Leave.” US residents can watch it for free at the CBS website.
This post originally appeared on Tor.com.
There’s a semi-official explanation for things like the names for the Romulans and their planets. Early explorers assigned code names (much like those used during the Cold War for Soviet missiles and military aircraft) which later automatic translators parrot back to humans no matter what names are used by the speaker being translated.
@1 Stickmaker
Thanks for the background. That sounds plausible, and I think it’s as good an explanation as anything else that has been offered, which admittedly isn’t much. The universal translator is one of the most magical things on the series, and one aspect of Enterprise and even the new Star Trek movie that I liked is a communications officer who actually has to use her lingual experience. If I recall, Uhura often had more translation work in the tie-in novels than she ever did on the show.
The is in my top five TOS episode of all time, Even though it was a very thining disgused retelling of “The Enemey Below” (a film well worth seeing.) the characters, the events, the drama are work on all cylinders. (The science is lacking but this is media SF not nuts-and-bolts Hard SF.
Let me rant for a moment.
This episode could never have been produced during the TNG run and that is exactly why I have always felt TNG was inferior to TOS. As it has been noted that darker side of humanity still exists in the story. People hate and fear and distrust others for irrational and prejudicial reasons some like Stiles have a very difficult time letting it go. However not only are such viewpoints throughly rejected and banished from polite society, the characters themselves struggle to overcome their base nature and harken to the better angels of the souls, even Stiles in the end.
In TNG there would be no struggle because people have evolved beyond even having such thoughts and have by some din of magic exorcised their demons into nothingness. This is not only boring, lacking in any dramatic sense, and unrealistic, it’s cheap.
What TOS played with as a theme over and over again is that we have the beast, the barbarian inside all of us. We all have ‘monster from the id,’ but we can overcome them. We will never fully win, the battle goes on every day, every year, and every generation, and it is not victory that matters but the struggle itself. The struggle to say I will not kill, today. I will not hate, today, I will not be the beast, today.
not only is that struggle better drama, and more like the real nature of humanity, it is a beacon to the audience on the path to follow.
I can never be perfect like Roddenberry’s TNG crew, but I can struggle to be better like Kirk and his.
My only complain about this episode is that Enterprise gets too much of the luck. I actually sort of wanted the ship to take a bit more of a beating to emphasize how evenly matched Kirk was with the Romulan commander.
Apropos of nothing, the sole Enterprise crewman who’s killed during the fight shares my surname.
@4 bobsandiego
Very true, and I would even argue that some of the more engaging TNG episodes are those where the crew is not shown at its “best.” There is some room for them to act like believable characters, with flaws and prejudices and feelings, but they’re few and far between. I think I always found the stories more interesting than the characters, with the reverse being true of DS9. At the very least, all the perfect Starfleet officers in TNG are guilty of hubris.
I agree with the commentary on the grittier (and more interesting) universe of TOS as compared to later incarnations. The universe in these early episodes seems fully fleshed and, in a surprising way, larger and more diverse and mysterious, unknowable than in later Trek.
I had the pleasure of rewatching this episode today, and what struck me was the steely competence of the crew. They’re each, Enterprise bridge crew and Romulans alike, depicted as veterans, on top of their game. Mature.
This is something that gets left behind in subsequent series, retcons and revisioning—that there was a vector of command for each of these characters. They had a prior history, and their ascent to rank and command followed a course. Kirk had a real backstory, which placed the Enterprise at his command not by accident or luck, but by hard work, ingenuity, and sheer talent and capability.
It’s really remarkable how mature many of these early episodes are in the subject matter they tackle.
I was confused by the Romulan commander’s stance as reluctant warrior, when here he is, breaking the treaty by crossing the neutral zone and making unprovoked attacks on Earth outposts. That seems to cast him more in the Star Trek VI / Into Darkness role as a hawk trying to provoke a war than as a dove. Looking back at the transcript, it appears the praetor who sponsors the ship is the hawk (the true villain of the piece?), and the commander is just following orders.
In a later series, this would be the start of an arc of episodes in which the Romulan’s act of aggression is the prelude to a new interstellar war–carrying the Pearl Harbor metaphor forward to its logical end. The Enterprise‘s worry that their pursuit into the NZ might trigger such a war seems like trying to close the barn door after the horses have fled; surely an act of war has already been committed by the other side.
I was left thinking, what did we learn from this episode? The characters don’t change much from start to finish, but it is an incredibly expansive world-building episode for Star Trek. No, the Enterprise is not just a research vessel. Yes, there is a future history, that the show is ambitious enough to explore. Here’s yet another kind of story which the Trek format is flexible enough to support, coupled with the first hint that recurring villains may be a Star Trek universe thing. One thing I’ve been noticing is how much the experience of World War II informs the sensibility of the show. Here they’re saying that current events–the, the Cold War, Viet Nam, and race struggles–are not, by any means, going to be held out of bounds. I’m a person who likes war stories less than your average bear, but “Balance of Terror” is like a manifesto. “We’re are not just fucking around here–look what we can do.”
It’s worth noting that the title is lifted from JFK’s 1961 inaugural address, in which (according to Wikipedia) “he described the U.S. and the Soviet Union, ‘both racing to alter that uncertain balance of terror that stays the hand of mankind’s final war.'” Contemporary audiences would surely have been unable to miss the Cold War parallel, and it would have not seemed academic, just four years and two months after the Cuban Missile Crisis.
A very good episode all around, but why do the Romulans construct their ships like caves? Every time they’re hit, dirt and rocks fall from the ceiling. I get it that asbestos is gritty, but the effect is stupid by the third time and absolutely ridiculous by the fifth time.
This clearly follows a World War II submarine plot exactly–aboard submarines, crew were instructed to remain still and be quiet when playing possum because sonar could pick up vibrations caused by human voices and other sounds. That a starship hundreds of kilometers away could detect human voices even at low levels is completely ridiculous, no matter how sensitive the sensors. Basically, if they can “hear” quiet sounds, they can pick up the life signs anyway, so what’s with all the whispering.